Guidelines for our written production

GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION





You are latter-day RobinsonCrusoe. You are stranded on a desert island. It´s been ten days since you got shipwrecked and you start losing hope of being rescued. In order to keep track of time you decide to write a diary.Your diary will be in the format of a blog. In groups of 3 to 4 students. You have to write your impressions of your life on the island, making an account of your daily activities. For such, we will be visiting the school´s cyber room every now and then: once to start the blog (choosing a name, writing an introduction, presenting yourself, giving background information to the creation of the blog); a couple of times to add information to it, and one last time to read your mates´blogs and write comments on them.

Pictures are highly welcome. Be creative. You can add ideas but cannot change the factual information in the story.

Turma 84 Grupo 2 B

Robinson Crusoe - grupo 2b


I'm hungry, it's the worst place in the world because I'm alone in
this desert island. There are only birds, monkeys, snakes and insects. I have just one friend, my dog. In all the time I think to come back to Europe,  the civilisation. My wife is alone too, I think. In the moment, I'm trying to survive, but it's impossible. I have to fish, to build my "house". Yesterday afternoon I explored more of the island, in the centre there are lots and lots of place to plantation. That's the first good new for me and my dog. It's obvious I'm not happy but I have hope. I thought, I thought, I thought and I've decided. "I will plant corn". After some days I will come back to look my new plantation.
After some days I return and the plantation and all are very, very good!
It's good because I'm more hope! Now I have to think how can I make food with corn? How can I make lot of thoses util for me and my life, obvious!!!
After lot of experiments, I finaly make one perfect bread. It was delicious, now  I have one moment fantastic, finaly one very, very good and healthy food, a corn bread!!
I have to pray to God. Because I make the most important think in my life.
All things were good. After several days I was walking in the most beautiful beach in the island when I saw a strange footprint, a human footprint.In this moment I was very very afraid. And I question for me, this footprint it's of cannibals. After some minutes I went to explore more the island and discover the new mistery in my life!!!
I explored, I explored and after three days I saw lot's of cannibals in a little cave. In the middle of this mans was just one, he had a good face but it's going to be sacrifice to the others eat him. I think and I concluse, These man have to life. I will save, I have to kill all the cannibals!
"After bleeding minutes"

Ok now this "victime cannibal is mine", I finally saved him. I killed half of this man. Thanks my God,Thanks!!!
I decided, the name of this "new person" will be Friday (the day when Robinson save this good man), in lots of days he helped me and I learned for him my religious, songs of Europe, historys, my language, all of the civilisation.
Explaned all it's difficult, but in several months, Friday will be my new friend, a good friend. He will help me to fish, to cook goats, to build houses with wood, to start a fire.                                                         
     
However there was a problem, we knew the cannibals went back to kill us, so we got ready for the fight, we did weapons and traps, they came and are lots, and we also had us two. It was very difficult win, but we've done it. After lot of blood and deaths we win, around six cannnibals were killed by us. The traps were perfect and the guns too. In this moment I was more happy because I can explain my life to Friday. In the middle of the battle I discover other europeans with the cannibals and we saved them and one special person, Friday's father. When we run out shouting loudly, some of the cannibals run and jumped in to their canoes, but I didn't believe that they came back to "my" island.




We were very, very happy, Friday and me, went to the centre of the island and we killed a fat goat and made some soap. After some days, I questioned to Friday's dad and he said the cannibals will not return, but he made a mistake, they came back. I had to think quickly, because the cannibals were near than us and I decided to went back to my hut and climbed to the top of the hill with my telescope. I could see a English ship in the centre island. There were eleven mens but three were prisoners that had to sat down on the beach while the others were running around looking at the island. The sea had gone out living there boat, I knew they couldn't leave here for ten hours. 

We think again and decided to found and save the europens while they went into the wood in the early afternoon. When I finaly found them, they were seating under a big tree so I decided to go and talk with them. 

I told the captain about my country bower